“Melanie is the best kind of voice to have in your head…one of the best things for my career has been Melanie’s advice, guidance, and red pen.”

Editing, Coaching & Consultations

From an in-person meeting, phone call, or Skype chat to discuss how to begin your project, to an in-depth big-picture critique of your draft, to editing a polished manuscript, I offer options for whatever help/advice you need at any stage of the writing process. Coaching can include setting deadlines and accountability check-ins, or having meetings to discuss story arcs, structure, plot holes or the business side of being a writer. With my education, training, and experience as a published author and writing instructor, I can lend a guiding hand to help you accomplish your writing goals.

Write to me at melanie.thorne@ymail.com and tell me a little about yourself and your project. We’ll email and/or set up a call to figure out a plan that works best for you.

“Melanie is, hands down, one of the smartest and most insightful instructors I’ve ever had…an instructor who can help you make your book the best it can be.”

Writing “Therapy”

Let me help you identify behaviors and thoughts that hinder progress, whether on the page or in your mind or emotions. Just like in psychological therapy sessions, sometimes it’s a block or issue we don’t even know is there that’s creating the most trouble.

Because I am also a writer, and a teacher of writing, I can not only offer advice on how to overcome psychological blocks, but also offer suggestions and ideas for craft-related questions and struggles.

I’ve been told I’m quite easy to talk to, and due to my history I’m insightful and observant and often ask the questions that get you to the things you need to realize.

We most likely won’t even need to delve into your relationship with your mother, though I will say–it’s often good material for writing. 🙂

Email me and we can set up a time to talk–about (almost) anything you want, and if you want, you can read more about my philosophy behind writing therapy here.

“When I had my first meeting with Melanie, within two minutes she had put me completely at ease and seemed to be reading my mind, answering questions before I even asked them…She is also just a remarkably smart, genuine and witty person. Being around her is always a good time and then almost without realizing it you’ve taken your work to the next level by the time you say goodbye.”

Query Letter Critiques

Query letters are your first impression to agents, so you want them to shine. And not to brag, but I did snag an agent with only two queries, so I feel like I am a good person to offer advice on this short but stress-inducing piece of writing. Let me help you unpack its parts and make it less scary and easier to approach.

Whether you are just starting to put together your query or are ready with a draft and need feedback, don’t tackle this important part of the publishing process on your own, or wait until an agent is waiting for you. Spending time on your query is critical to your publishing career. Sooner is better than later in getting started so you have time to revise.

I can read and edit your query letter, synopsis/outline, and first five-ten pages, or any combination of the three elements generally requested in submissions to agents.

I can also offer guidance on the submission process and tips for choosing the right agent for you.

Email me for a consultation and we’ll move you forward in the publishing journey! melanie.thorne@ymail.com

UCLA Extension Classes

Most quarters I teach a class in the novel writing series at UCLA Extension. Check the catalog for the most up to date course information.